
One of the nicest things to note in part two was the author's growth as a writer. Renehan has injected Ayesha part two with a burst of action, suspense and some great twists that I didn't see coming. I also felt this particular book flowed better and tied the disparate scenes and arcs together better than the first. One of the issues I had with the original Ayesha was some of the stilted dialogue. This still isn't perfect in part two, but it is vastly improved. What was exceptional was the way Renehan was able to link all the disparate characters she introduced into the story and mesh them together, surprising me on more than one occasion. This is still a romance at heart and the love between the two principal characters Ayesha and Ger is what carries the heart and soul of this book, but there is plenty of action, mystery and suspense to keep the most die-hard of fans interested.
I was thrilled when it was clear by the end of the book that there would be a part three. The book, does however stand well on its own feet as a stand-alone story and again Renehan has to be congratulated on her development as an author.
This is one of the true joys of reading indie authors - watching their growth from book to book.
If you are a romantic soul, but you also like action and thrills, then I have to highly recommend you to read Ayesha: To Break a Promise Part 2. I loved it and happily give it the full five stars. So looking forward to the final book in this series.
